Comments on: I’ll Be Home for Christmas Part 3

By: Seann

Seann — Wed, 09 Oct 2019 21:46:28 +0000

=D =D =D

By: Omega White

Omega White — Wed, 09 Oct 2019 12:55:53 +0000

I loved this installment. The dialogue is excellent and witty, especially the creek analysis. I’m looking forward to George’s trial. Great job!

By: Gabrielle Ash

Gabrielle Ash — Tue, 08 Oct 2019 03:36:05 +0000

As a former library assistant, I love that Marlene got that job! It was one of my favorites. Books everywhere! Haha

The bit at the end with Bobby Lee and the fishing license was excellent. Shows that ~maybe~ George Leroy is starting to change… maybe. He’s thinking about it.

Also, your dialogue is amazing. Absolutely love it.

-Gabi

By: Lorrie Domin

Lorrie Domin — Tue, 08 Oct 2019 02:44:22 +0000

I’m enjoying all the family changes.
@lorriehdomin

By: lorraine hawley

lorraine hawley — Tue, 08 Oct 2019 00:13:13 +0000

Oops. Forgot to put my Twitter handle on my comment. @dreaminofanovel Great job on your blog. Looking forward to following your writing.

By: lorraine hawley

lorraine hawley — Tue, 08 Oct 2019 00:07:37 +0000

Such a fun story. Loved the line, “He left sweat, toil, and frenzied ambition to other fools.” Looking forward to reading the next..

By: Sarah

Sarah — Mon, 07 Oct 2019 18:22:32 +0000

Yes! So glad Marlene is working at the library! Interesting that George Leroy might go to the jail library out of boredom! Ha!

This is so good. I can’t wait to read what is next.

By: Ally Johnson

Ally Johnson — Mon, 07 Oct 2019 17:00:46 +0000

Loved the story! And I flup back to twitter with this line firmly lodged in my brain, “If everybody was like you and only took what they needed, I guess that’d work. But some folks is so greedy, they’d fish everything up just so’s nobody else could have any.” He certainly does have a point!

By: Kimberly - KKAbsherWrites

Kimberly - KKAbsherWrites — Sun, 06 Oct 2019 21:32:31 +0000

Good for Marlene getting that job and learning to cook, too!

By: Kafie Carman

Kafie Carman — Thu, 03 Oct 2019 16:20:06 +0000

I now wait for Wednesdays. @CarmanKafie