Comments on: THE SEVENTEENTH CHRISTMAS TREE Part 5 https://sharonjmondragon.com/the-seventeenth-christmas-tree-part-5/#utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=the-seventeenth-christmas-tree-part-5 Where Courage and Kindness Meet Thu, 05 Dec 2019 03:43:21 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.3 By: Cindy Helton https://sharonjmondragon.com/the-seventeenth-christmas-tree-part-5/#comment-138 Thu, 05 Dec 2019 03:43:21 +0000 http://sharonjmondragon.com/?p=1007#comment-138 Well you sure know how to build suspense!! Sometimes it takes a real jolt to bring a person to their senses. Wonder if this is what will happen to Nick – or will he just let her fall??

]]> By: Sharon Mondragon https://sharonjmondragon.com/the-seventeenth-christmas-tree-part-5/#comment-137 Thu, 05 Dec 2019 02:12:58 +0000 http://sharonjmondragon.com/?p=1007#comment-137 In reply to Elizabeth Norris.

LOL!

]]> By: Elizabeth Norris https://sharonjmondragon.com/the-seventeenth-christmas-tree-part-5/#comment-136 Thu, 05 Dec 2019 00:37:51 +0000 http://sharonjmondragon.com/?p=1007#comment-136 I just knew he wasn’t going to be able to go through with his plan!! But, I can’t wait to hear how this ends!! I’m still hoping your “calming” nature will shine through and make Nick a hero and save the day! (Or will that obnoxious Bob dare to ask Nick if his insurance policy is up to date and send Nick rightfully over the edge!)

]]> By: Sharon Mondragon https://sharonjmondragon.com/the-seventeenth-christmas-tree-part-5/#comment-135 Wed, 04 Dec 2019 23:19:50 +0000 http://sharonjmondragon.com/?p=1007#comment-135 In reply to Kristen Johnson.

I am indeed learning to create tension in my stories. There was a time when I couldn’t bear to do that to readers. One agent described one of my books as “soothing.” This sent me straight into a major revision, because I knew she was telling me, in the kindest manner, that a book needs conflict!

]]> By: Debbie Edmisten https://sharonjmondragon.com/the-seventeenth-christmas-tree-part-5/#comment-134 Wed, 04 Dec 2019 21:46:13 +0000 http://sharonjmondragon.com/?p=1007#comment-134 I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Can’t wait to find out what happens!!!!!

]]> By: Kristen Johnson https://sharonjmondragon.com/the-seventeenth-christmas-tree-part-5/#comment-133 Wed, 04 Dec 2019 18:46:20 +0000 http://sharonjmondragon.com/?p=1007#comment-133 NOOOO!!! What’s going to happen?! Oh, you are cruel, Sharon, to leave us hanging like that. Can’t wait for the next installment!

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